All About Love

Tenth Secret: Edit well

If you’ve developed your characters properly, and advanced your narrative effectively, then your greatest task is to write until the end. Just about everything else can be fixed in the rewrite.

It’s hard to do. Your writer-self is in love with every word and as proud as a new mother. To edit effectively, you have to push this maternal being aside and “murder the babies”, as Ezra Pound said.

You have to switch into being a critical editor, rather than a sensitive writer. You must look at every scene, character and detail. Do they take the story forward? Is there a reason for them to be there?

Here’s a tip: Take a pile of white index cards and allocate one to each chapter in your book. Write a one-sentence description of each scene. If you can’t write down what happens in a scene, you’ll have to seriously consider whether it deserves to be there. What is its purpose? Be ruthless.

Cut adjectives and look for the dreaded sagging middle. If things sag in the middle, look for scenes where nothing much happens. Kill them or make sure something happens that will move your story along.

They’re easy to say, but harder to adhere to. I guarantee, though, that if you can make these points work for you, you’ll have a publishable Romance, full of love, conflict and suspense.

Second Assignment:

Part One:
Write the first page of your romance – no more than 300 words. The first paragraphs of a story must draw your reader in, and make sure they carry the book to the till. Make sure you don’t waste your most critical passage on background or too much description.

Start in a scene where something is happening. In the process, we’d like to meet your heroine and glimpse her environment – not in great detail, but we’d like to form our first impression of her and her world.

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Part Two:
You’ve had your first taste of romance writing, and the skills you’ll use. Now it’s time to get serious. , where we’ll equip you with all the skills you’ll need to write a publishable romance.

 

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Module One

This module is free. Don’t even think about it. Jump right in and start today. It’s about writing romance. In fact, it’s about writing anything - well, perhaps not manuals on automobile maintenance - but anything in the fiction line.

It forms your basic introduction to the writing life.

We will teach you how to find your own voice and write with fluency and conviction. Perhaps, most important of all, we will confirm your power to make the hearts of your readers beat that little bit faster.

Romance isn’t just about heroines and heroes. It’s about using the power of your unique voice to make your reader believe in the world you create for them.

This module, which prepares and leads you into both The Guide to Writing Romance and The Guide to Writing Lesbian Romance, consists of four short sections. We’ve designed it so that you’ll have fun trying a number of writing drills, while equipping yourself with skills.

The exercises will free your inner writer, develop confidence, banish self-conscious writing and grow your own writer’s voice.